Rate my freestyle of Beamer Benz or Bentley 1 to 10 and maybe some constructive criticism?
Hook:
Beamer Benz or Bentley
Bentley Benz or Beamer
Beamer Benz or Bentley
The haters don't effect me
Beamer Benz or Bentley
Bentley Benz or Beamer
Beamer Benz or Bentley
The haters don't effect me
Chorus:
I'm fresh I'm fly you so damn not
More than 500 horses when I drive by
I'm calm I'm cool all my clothes brand new
I don't lend things , you could have the whole damn coupe
Verse 1:
Your choice is Honda Ford or Chevy
Mine is Lambo Rari Benzy
I be cruisin down Kedzie
In my Beamer Benz or Bentley
you can tell by looking at me
That my jeans are never empty
Let me say that one more time
Trick my jeans are never empty
I got Banks like Lloyd
and Jew-els like Santana
I'm so fly Wit my ride
And my Gucci Louie Prada
And as for the mula
I gotta lotta lotta
And my Bentley white just like me
And my whip is always foreign
When it come to money I don't make it rain it's only pourin
Damn rite I drive that Mercedes whip
And I get all of da ladies
My swagga just went up and now I'm in the damn big building
By the way all y'all haters can just go to hell and
All y'all people here best pay attention
Also did I mention
I'm cookin this beat like a steamer
As I ride by in my Beamer
My BMW the most expensive in the room
My Bentley gettin old
Here's the keys you can have it
I got enough doe to buy about 8 more coupes
[Chorus]
[Hook]
I got my Bentley Benz or Beamer
And ur girl really a keeper
But I really can't keep her
Cuz we both know I could do way better
If u like this, you ain't heard nothin
My rhymes can go way deeper
I'm a taker like T.I
See I
how I am designed
Cuz if I want it , imma take it
It's either make it or it's break it
Cuz my flows sick and yours just fake it
My talents been sleeping, I'm bout to wake it
Cuz dis is BBOB
And I bet bust like BOB
I got dem 25s spinnin
You Recognize me cuz I'm winnin
I'm pillin up my millions
Next day it be billions
They say it's cuz I'm just too brilliant
I say it's really cuz beats I'm killin
You try and diss me
You gotta think is it really worth it
Cuz I mean really dis rappin thang just ain't fit for you
So fool back off take a dip in the pool and Also can you do me a favor dude when you see my girl, try not to drool
Another thing I ain't go reference u as cool, only in your dreams
So I gotta say hi as-I-ride-by-in-my
Hook:
Bitch I said constructive criticism not hatin fucks wrong witchu fuckin dumass
Way to materialistic, weak similies, weak rhyme pattern. I’ll give you a 3 . If my comment hurts your feelings, or you think I’m crazy, go listen to a song called "Acknowledge" by Masta Ace. I think listening/studying it may alter your thinking of what hip hop skill is. Also, Masta Ace is one of Eminem’s biggest influences, as stated in Eminem’s book, "The Way I Am."
homo
It was a 6.5/10 in the beginning then it turned into a 2/10 pass the first few lines. I give ya a 4/10